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… and reported, "Houston, Tranquility Base here. The Eagle has landed."
… and reported to Houston they had landed.
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… occupied with several post-landing procedures, reconfiguring switches and systems.
Next, he completed post-landing procedures by calibrating instruments
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… found time to report to Mission Control
… before informing Mission Control
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…that he had manually flown the lunar module over the rockstrewn crater where the automatic landing system was taking it.
…about bypassing the landing site because there was too much debris there.
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Then he made his first quick-look science report ... about every variety of rock … a hill in view, just about on the ground track ahead of us.”
After his cursory science report of the surface,
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Armstrong then started preparing their spacecraft for takeoff,
… he prepared critical systems for takeoff
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…setting up critical systems to be ready in case something happened and they had to leave the lunar surface quickly.
… in case of an emergency,
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…short break in this activity gave Armstrong a chance to pass along more information about the landing site.
… taking a break to transmit additional information about the colourless lunar surface.
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Setting up the spacecraft systems took another hour and a half to complete…
Completing the contingency arrangements,
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… it seemed too much to expect the men to take a nap before they set foot on the moon.
… since they were too excited to nap…
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Although they had been awake almost 11 hours and had gone through some stressful moments during the landing…
… despite stress and not sleeping for 11 hours.
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At 9:56 p.m. he stepped onto the moon's surface, …
Stepping onto the moon, …
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… and Armstrong proclaimed, "That's one small step for man, one giant leap for mankind".
Armstrong broadcasted his famous line.
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…lowered a camera on the lunar equipment carrier which Armstrong immediately began using.
… Armstrong began to use the camera
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Armstrong conducted a brief commemorative ceremony (reading the plaque attached to the lunar module)
Armstrong conducted a commemorative ceremony of reading the plaque on the lunar module…
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and had a short conversation with President Richard Nixon.
… and communicated with the President.
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supplemented earth's limited television view of their activities with descriptions of what they were seeing and doing.
He provided commentary to supplement television transmissions of their activities.